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05 September 2007 @ 04:01 pm
 
Seventeen more days. Still pretty bummed about the closure of Avatarsues' journal. I always loved to read it. It doesn't seem as if, by whatever miracle, she'll be returning. So it looks like you're stuck with me... or avatar_sues ... or atla_sues, though they haven't been updating. Anyway, on to today's sue.

Title: Analay, the Shadowbender
Author: Avatar Luna

Rating:

Full Name: Analay
Species: Human / Shadowbender / Psychic
Hair: Not mentioned.
Eyes: Not mentioned.
Unusual Markings: None mentioned.
Special Abilities: Can predict the future.
Special Possessions: None.

Origin: Gaoling, but she now works in the Fire Nation palace.
Connections to Canon: Azula's slave.
Analay has a vision and finds out the location of the Avatar's location. When asked what she saw by Azula, she lies and tells her that the Fire Nation will win the war. Pleased, Azula dismisses her. Analay goes outside and vents her anger. She yells about how much she hates Azula and how much she sympathizes with the Avatar since they are both alone in the world. She reminces about how she was considered the freak of the Fire Nation by many and how Shadowbenders were misunderstood. She decides to flee the Fire Nation and join the Avatar. She begins to pack he things but is called down to dinner. She sits with Ozai who asks her what she is thinking. She lies again by saying 'nothing'. That night, after everyone had gone to bed, Analay escapes the palace easily. Strangers give her food and she is led by an old man to a ship that will take her to Ba Sing Se.

Notes: I had been wondering where I had heard "Analay the Shadowbender" before. It wasn't until I saw the reviews did I remember the Nick Mag Original Character contest way back when. I'm not sure if it's the same Analay or not, but I wouldn't be surprised if it was. In any case, a pretty cookie cutter story if you ask me. There are already flashing signs that Analay will be paired with Aang.

Sample:
He nodded, but I knew he could tell I was lying. I just couldn’t tell the truth. When everyone was excused and sent to bed, I sat in my quarters for several hours, packing pictures and other useful items. The bag wasn’t big, so I couldn’t put much in. I also took the giant sweater I had gotten from my father and a doll my mother gave me. When I was able to hear the Fire Lord’s loud and obnoxious snoring, I jumped out the window, landed on both feet and ran through the streets. People were asleep in their houses, but I had to move quietly either way. The guards were sleeping at their posts, making it easier to escape. Once out of the town, I wandered for a while, stopping in small towns. People offered me food. I took it with my most polite smile, asking people when the next ship to the Earth Kingdom was. One old man led me to a port with a boat heading to Ba Sing Se. Amazed, I took the ticket he offered me, and got on the ship.
 
 
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(Anonymous) on April 30th, 2008 03:41 am (UTC)
Last one?
Yikes, I remember the Shadowbenders, and all of those other whacky bending avatarsues compiled.

But don't tell me you've died, too. :( Avatar has some great Sues (as in awful) and I miss the sporking!
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